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Read the full comic here:

Here are the storyboards:

Here is the original script: WORD Format

Facts about the comic:
- Time to write the script = 15 minutes
- Time to draw the storyboards = 6 hours
- Time to photograph it all = 6 hours
- Time to edit it all = 30 hours
(Page 10 took over 6 hours alone to edit)

- The costumes were hand sewn and cost around $200
- The lightsabers were built from PVC pipe and basic materials from Home Depot for under $20

Some Reader's Comments:
From honestrosewater-
"Yeah, nice job, it's cool. The Sith's eyes were the best...
The layout was kind of annoying- having each page in it's own window
disrupted the flow, for me anyway. Why not put it all in one window
and just scroll down- a layout like a comic in the newspaper? Or have
a [next page] navigation?
Other than the navigation, it was impressive."

From Derek S.-
"Very cool stuff, man! I am most impressed. My roommates also liked it a lot! I can't wait to see the next ones"

From Xurion400-
"hahahaha that's awesome.. i like on page 9 when caleb says NNOOO! but his face is like duhhh and i like the effects especially the stuff coming from the sith's hand on page 8 ...very well done graphically"

[The following quotes are from the Somethingleet.com forums - the original thread can be found here]
From necro:
"it's a good idea, I just think starwars is a bit played out on the internet and the photo's just look like dudes in a park...the one guy is wearing jeans."

From WhiteRabbit:
"I think it's awsome! Great job."

From MedHead:
"It's well done in terms of user-made comics, but there are some parts that really are needing work...
Master Belac needs to learn how to emote...
Otherwise, it's fine. I'm not trying to sound overly critical. I dislike Star Wars. Still takes a lot of guts to go to a park and act out scenes. Overall it was done well.

From zao:
"The eyes don't look well done at all in the picture. I don't really like any of it, like med said, you guys need a lot more emotion."